Diamante poem about christmas

A Diamante poem is a poem in the shape of a diamond. Each line uses specific type of words, like  adjectives and -ing words. It does not have to rhyme.

Walt: write diamante,, acrostic and haiku poems around a theme.

Play refliction

Walt: Understand the author's point of view Use fluency and expression when reading out loud

Level Ten

Walt: Retell the story again in our own words

Read with expression and fluency

Make up magic

Spiderman

Peter Parker was bitten by a highly enhanced spider which gave him super powers that includes, strength, agility, spider senses and the ability to scale buildings .He is a superhero that protects mankind. With great power comes great responsibility.

Spider man wears a blue and red costume with a mask to keep his identity a secret. He is a protector of mankind with great powers come great responsibility.

Suzie and the space nuts episode 2

Our reding group has been reading about a book called Suzie and the space nuts. This is episode 2. If you want to know more about the story Please leave a comment below.

Suzie and the space nuts

Holidays

Holidays has begun! As soon as the home bell rung I shot of out my classroom door and ran all the way to the shops to wait for my mum to pick me up. I suddenly thought to myself the holidays have finally begun.

On the first week of the holidays I went to my best friend Teija’s sleepover. I woke up ready and waited for Teija to pick me up, then finally the doorbell rang it was time to go.It wasin’t just me that went to the sleepover, there was Sheales and Skye.

I hoped in the car and we drove off. Our first stop was yummy avocado picking. Once we got to the avocado trees we saw two couples and two puppies. The puppy's name were Tui and Zani”  I loved Tui and Zani. Then we had to go, as we were leaving we saw another big dog and the funny thing was that dogs names was Tui. Tui was beautiful but she was little bit scared of kids.

After avocado picking we went to Teijas house and started setting up our beds. Then minutes later we went to countdown to get us some lunch. Then we went back to Teijas house and ate and played in the garage. A few hours laters we went to get some pizza for dinner. Then it was time for bed we all said goodnight and went to bed.  

On the second week of the holidays me and my sister and her friends went to the GI pools. We walked there. Once we got to the pools we got changed and jumped in the pool.

After a few minutes we started back flipping in the pools. The scary thing was I never Knew how to back flip but then I learnt. I failed some times but the more you fail the more you succeed.

Then we all went home and had some cake. My highlight of the holiday was when we went to the pools.

My pirate profile

My Narritive

Once there lived a pirate named Captain Jake. He was known as a very nice and kind pirate. He sailed the seven seas  on a huge ship called the SKULL FACE with his pirate crew. Jake liked to wear big baggy pants, stripey tops and black boots.

One day Jake and his crew were out fishing. As they were fishing, Jake and came across an island “set sail for that mysterious island crew” Jake called out “we must check that island” and so they decided to land.

As soon as they landed they jumped of their ship and grabbed their shovels (Just incase there was treasure). They saw an X sign, they started digging. They finally finished digging “Whoo ee” Jake sighed guess what they found?.

Now you would think it was treasure but it was actually a map to treasure. “We have found a map to treasure we shall follow the map” said one person from Jake’s crew.  

So they started walking. They walked night till day and day till night, until they reached the actual X. “We made it” said Jake “let's start digging” then they started to dig. DIG DIG DIG.

They got to the bottom “We finally found it” “TREASURE” said Jake, just that second he had a sudden thought to himself. He felt sorry for all those other pirates who had nothing, so instead of keeping it to himself he shared it with the all the other pirates even the mean ones.

Because remember at the start of my writing how I said he was a very kind pirate well now you know.

THE CURSED TREASURE

The Cursed Treasure

Captain Morgan Adams was a tyrant. A pirate bent on causing mayhem and habik. Across the seven seas but, also an enemy of the British

empire. Along with his crew they had bordered smaller ships and taken their booty for keeping.  This all changed when they came across the cursed treasure of Davy Jones Locker.

Anna and Nyrees maori rock

In my reading group we have been reading about Maori rocks. In this presentation you will found all 3 rocks, Pounamu, Mudstone and Volcanic glass 

Zack and the night

Zack and the night

Zack was ecstatic but also curious. “What was a night and shining armor doing out in the middle of the forest”?, let alone wanting to play with dragons. “Didn't he know they were meant to be enemies after all”. Surely he was up to something and it was Zacks to find out this nights ourtereamotive.



My score out of 15 is 10

Nyree dinorsaur

Yes I would love to” said Sam. While they were Sam fell over “OWWWWW” Sam Screamed “what happened”? asked Mack and Zack “I hurt myself” cried Sam.

                      TO BE CONTINUED………….

Anna & Nyree living on a lava flow

Nyree and Anna Living on a Lava Flow from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

WALT: Understand vocabulary that is more difficult and specific, WALT: Use prior knowledge with information from the text to help our understanding We have been chosen to make a movie about Living on a lava flow. In our movie you will hear some interesting words that you might want to know what they mean. Hope you enjoy PLZ leave a comment on our blog BYE

Volcanoes of the world

Understand vocabulary that is more difficult and specific,

WALT: Use prior knowledge with information from the text to help our understanding

Click Here. Those balloons  are the volcanoes that I pined.  I learnt how to pin volcanoes of the world in Google maps. The 3 best volcanoes are Mt Wellington, Mt St Helens and Mt Rainier. 

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The Day Things Started Disappearing

AND SO THE STORY STARTS LIKE THIS

Once upon a time there was man named Jack. One night Jack was brushing his teeth for bed “la la la la” Jack sung. Then finally it was time for bed. Once Jack got into bed he was about to shut his eyes when suddenly he saw from the corner of his eyes something disappear.

He jumped out of his bed “did I just see something disappear?” he asked himself. Then he hopped on to the floor and grabbed a bat (just incase someone was there). He went into the Kitchen “nothing here” then he went into the dining room “nothing here.

Cling something disappeared again “what was that who’s there” he scaredly said. Jack opened the front door went outside and there it was a little teeny tiny alien that YES happened to be stealing stuff from Jack's house. “AHHHHHHHHH” Screamed Jack “there’s an alien at my front door!!!”

“Hi” said Jack “HELLO” said the cute little teeny tiny alien, but the alien wasn't so cute when he pulled out his fire gun and shot Jack in the elbow “OWWWW” Jacked yelled, then again the alien shot Jack in the leg “DOUBLE OWWW” said Jack.

“Why are you stealing stuff from my house”? asked Jack the little alien began to cry “oh no sorry little guy” “ me keep steal stuff cause me have nothing” the little alien sobbed.

Just then Jack had an idea in his head “Ok little guy” Jack angrily said “how about I give you some and only some not all of my stuff some, and you stop stealing stuff from my house” said jack “deal” Jack said “deal” the alien sadly sobbed.

And so the two of them did there happy deal. Then the alien said “you know where to find me” “ok” Jack said, “BYE” they both yelled at each other. “Man that was a long and stressful night, well bed time”. GOODNIGHT .

THE END

Sudden Disappearance

Sudden Disappearance  

Something strange was happening. One by one, things were disappearing. First my mum then my dad now my sister were all gone. It was my job to investigate for sudden disappearance and find a solution. 


Write what is being dictated to us, word for word



My score out of 10 is:8

Cat Naritive

It was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. Johnson the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. Her master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly her friend Byron came along. He was looking very sorry for himself.

“Why the long face”? asked Johnson, to which Byron replied “ I'm lost can you help me look for my family”? said Byron. “Of course I can” replied Johnson “thank you” and so they went looking for Byron parents.

As they were looking they saw a sign that read LOST CAT. “Look it’s you!” said Johnson “It is too” replied Byron “let’s see where you have to go It read If you find him bring him to 46 Andrea Street please.

So they went to 46 Andrea Street. Once they got there Byron thanked Johnson for finding Byron’s way home and offered up a reward of Johnson bringing Byron home. Then Byron went inside and Johnson went back to his spot on the beach, and they all lived happily ever after”

Max's walk

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word                                                      Max’s walk Max could see from a distance a family that were at each other's throats, The father was yelling “How could you forget the food”? to which the mother replied “It was a honest mistake i’m sure someone will help us”. My score out of 14 is 14