Thursday, 3 April 2014


  1. Hi Nyree,

    Well done with these sentences - you have made them a lot more intestesting and descriptive. Be careful where you put question marks - are you really asking a question?

    From Miss Nalder

  2. Hello Nyree, my name is Ashley Bigoney. I am a student in the class EDM310 at the University of South Alabama. You did a wonderful job with the sentences! You definitely made them more enjoyable and interesting for the reader. I really liked your creativity! It is neat that you call your mother mum, i call mine, mom. Keep up the good work!