Monday, 22 February 2016

Max's walk

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

                                                     Max’s walk
Max could see from a distance a family that were at each other's throats, The father was yelling “How could you forget the food”? to which the mother replied “It was a honest mistake i’m sure someone will help us”.

My score out of 14 is 14

1 comment:

  1. Excellent work Nyree at listening, spelling and punctuating the paragraph that was dictated to you!!